The narrative was good, drawing could be better but the animation was good. backgrounds are okay (they're not bad)
Overall, nice job!
The narrative was good, drawing could be better but the animation was good. backgrounds are okay (they're not bad)
Overall, nice job!
I really liked the storyline, the humour reminds me of "It's always Sunny", the character designs are good, and I like the change of mood in the story. My only complaint is that there could have been a bit more animation, but regardless, it was still good
I actually never seen "It's Always Sunny" XD
The character designs aren't very good, and the animation is incredibly limited. If this is a teaser for a series, I can't see what the teaser is trying to say about it.
Thank you for your comment. I was just showing my drawings actually. This is not a teaser as such, its just to show the drawings i have come up with. Can you say more about the character designs. Thank you.
Great satire, animation was smooth, but the linework could be a lot better. Still a great animation though!
Yeah, my linework usually isn't this bad. It had been a while since I had drawn before making this, and even then, a lot of this was rushed. Will definitely be taking it slower for the next cartoon though, so hopefully that won't be a problem.
Thanks!
Animation and art are decent / good, the writings pretty funny, and the dialogue isn't over the top or obnoxious.
The acting isn't quite good, not really enough emotion in the speaking.
However, do make an episode 2, you've got me interested
This is really good! it was well executed (unlike my xmas toon) and it had some really cool special effects and animation!
Keep it up!
food for the bugs
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